Friday 21 August 2020

Sick Sentences!!!!

 

Here is the photo for the sentences.

Sick sentences - The Jedi landed on the runway. There were lots of storm troopers. There were lots of aircraft.


Healthy sentences - Enormous ships approached the land as it was getting destroyed by the plasma turrents, the Jedi and his crew has finally landed after a day flight. There was tons of storm troopers, all with guns and all with no fear in their eyes, not even a sprinkle of some. They were all coming in special built aircraft's, mostly made with steel and in weird shapes but at least they were really cool.

1 comment:

  1. Good afternoon, Pavan.

    Thank you for sharing your writing on your blog. You have definitely made the sick sentences more interesting by adding adjectives and some WOW vocabulary.
    Ka pai!

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