Wednesday 26 August 2020

Sic vs healthy sentences!!!!!

 

Sick sentence - There was a house on a snail. The snail was big and twisty. It floated in space. There were lots of stars.

Healthy sentences - Magically a very specific house teleported onto a substantial snail. It was very mountainous and was getting very dizzy by all the spinning its been doing for the past 50 years. Space was the best place for the 50 year old snail. Sparkling in the universe the stars were dazzling with great shine in their body as usual.


That's all for today guys. Be safe in your bubbles and I will now blog ya later.

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