Hi everyone here is my sick sentence vs great sentences upgrades. So everyone sit back with popcorn and relax a very satisfying story.
The very bad one - The family held onto the plants. They were in the giants garden. They could see the giant. He looked angry.
The very good one - Delighted, the joyful family held onto the very soft plants, but what they didn't notice was that it was the great ominous giants garden of doom. The little girl saw a terrifying look on the giants face as he was looking through the smashed windows. Looks like the giant isn't a myth they thought in their intelligent mind. They saw the giant face through the window but there was no fear in their eyes.
That's all for today folks.
Have a safe lock down !!!
Like it, Pavan. I particularly enjoyed the "very good one", quite scary and good use of suspense. Maybe you could add a simile next time?
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment Mr Pressnell, I will try my best to add similes next time. I really like the very good one as well.
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